Reaction to our (not finished yet) opening

After editing for a while i think we have developed writing block... but for editing. We are so use to seeing the opening that we have become nub to what is working and what isnt so we though it was time to ask other what they think for the opening. This is the first person we have ask, and are going to ask more people to create a clear understanding of what different type of people like and dislike about our clip, to give us a clearer understanding of what we need to improve and what we do not. Our first helper is fellow media student: Shaileyee

Sound

We, MAC4, have really turned it around. We finally have all footage and edited it. Now we are just making the last few additions and adjustments, on of which is incredibly important. Music/ Sound. When first coming up to the idea we thought that classic or jazz music would be perfect as there is some sort of creepy/ scary element to it. After film the perfect song popped into my head. My funny Valentine by Frank Sinatra, and when put on to the clip it was perfect. However to make the audience to view him as a 'normal man', we needed something else aswell. When filming we had the radio on and it was perfect to add that sound. Later we added some tuning to it to make it seem more nature to the audience.

Sound in Opening